hey all
i know i said id post the first chapter of the story were working on like... a week ago, but things have been hectic, and i havent been too eager to display my weak story telling prowess..
some things to keep in mind are that its been a long time since ive written anything, and even when i did they never amounted to anything, and were mostly just reveries i wish i could have lived instead of this nightmare. cody and i havent taken the time to create names for all the characters, and have just been using people from our system(s), though that will change down the road most likely. for now it just makes things easier, especially keeping the characters in character, haha. just gotta ask whoever what they would do in the given situation >XD
im having a hard time deciding whether to end the first chapter here, or to expand on things a little more..
some of the story is based on us of course, and the setting is in our inner world. the same can be said about some of our experiences..
anyways, try not to get too frustrated with my crappy writing... ^^;
( Dissonance, Chapter I )anyways... -_-;
( rant + general idea behind the second chapter )-lukies + cody