Well, you didn't. If you wanted to show the integration becoming undone, you need to actually have plot events and dialogue where that happens. You can't just put the others on screen and call it implied, because there's this whole wrong theory about how everyone is still there as part of the post-integration person. And anyway, the audience assumption, sadly, is gonna be that integrated = fixed. So if you go straight from integrated Heather to happy ending, it's never going to occur to anyone that they re-split.
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Re: part 2
Date: 2007-05-09 08:25 pm (UTC)