now that my family has had their say.. yes, Jessica and Nikki are a cliche.. a bad one..
You have made some good changes.. like taking out the introduction about the sexual abuse and hopefully filling in the areas where it's hinted at that she decides not to integrate, and instead live a life with her family both inside and out. Those are commendable and improve the screenplay a great deal. I hope that you will continue to work on these points.
-Liam