It is mostly the line about "Heather's innocence safely preserved, colouring on the floor" bit, I think.
Finally, the "me or them" story line. What about it do you find cliche? Again, can you give me examples of movies that have explored this? I'm not making a documentary or a docudrama, so what would you consider an acceptable conflict? What would you consider an acceptable story line?
Please read my article through. What you consider an acceptable storyline is, in the end, entirely your decision, but you will be responsible for presenting a specific image of multuplicity to the public. The "me and them" story creates tension, sure. But what impression of multiplicity does it give?
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Finally, the "me or them" story line. What about it do you find cliche? Again, can you give me examples of movies that have explored this? I'm not making a documentary or a docudrama, so what would you consider an acceptable conflict? What would you consider an acceptable story line?
Please read my article through. What you consider an acceptable storyline is, in the end, entirely your decision, but you will be responsible for presenting a specific image of multuplicity to the public. The "me and them" story creates tension, sure. But what impression of multiplicity does it give?